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Complicated Ch.2 by ~Apsol:iconApsol:



A second later, Kiba was gapping at her, her middle and index finger pressed to the middle of his forehead. Oh. My. GOD! All that came out of her mouth was a tiny squeak. In her panic, her Byakugan had activated, and she automatically pressed the chakra point in the center of his forehead!!     
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Kiba gawked at Hinata, confusion and hurt battling in his animalistic eyes. Hinata held his gaze, her trembling fingers still pressed to his forehead. They stayed like that for a few seconds, until Kiba’s eyelids drooped and finally closed, ending their intense staring contest. His grip on her shoulder loosened, while his other hand dropped from her chin. There was a sharp intake of breath from Hinata as Kiba fell forward, his body crushing the petite girl under it.

Hinata struggled under his weight for a few seconds, before she gave up and lay there, playing back what had just happened in her head. Oh my God!! What have I done?! She suddenly noticed how quiet Kiba was, and was afraid she’d killed him, till she felt his hot breath on her cheek. “I-I need to get him to a hospital,” she muttered as she tried to free herself again. It wasn’t easy; Kiba’s legs were tangled with hers, one f his limp arms was over her arm, while the elbow of the other dug painfully into her chest. After a few minutes of sliding, rearranging, and pulling, she was free, panting a little from the struggle as well as the heat from the scorching sun. And I was stupid enough to wear this heavy coat…

I’m free, but how am I am I suppose to get him to the hospital?
The unconscious boy was almost twice her weight, not to mention 4 inches taller. While she devised a plan, she leaned him against the tree, making sure he wouldn’t fall over when she let go. As she moved him, she realized his breathing was becoming faint. Damn! I need to get him to a hospital, NOW!! She had no idea what she did to him, she’d never actually pressed that point before, but it wasn’t good. She’d seen Neji press it to get Lee to shut up once, but for all she knew, he could have used a drop of chakra. She had no idea how much she’d forced on the point.

She cursed herself as she examined Kiba with her Byakugan. She let out a horrified squeak when she saw that chakra was building up on the point she pressed, putting pressure on his skull. She thought about pressing the point again to relieve the pressure, then pushed the thought away when she realized she might make it worse. In desperation, she tried carrying Kiba piggy - back, only ending up on falling her butt after a few steps. She got up and stared at her injured friend. Her mind and heart racing, she fell to her knees, tears starting to stream down her face. You idiot! Just because you didn’t want a kiss, you inflict a life - threatening injury on your teammate! She sobbed, glancing at Kiba through her wet lashes. The very least you could do is stop crying and get help!!

She took in a shaky breath and got to her feet. She closed her eyes and concentrated, opening them again with small, bulging veins spreading from her pale eyes. She searched the surrounding land, in hopes of finding someone to help her carry him. Her intense gaze shot back to Kiba, as he let out a painful moan, the pressure slowly growing on his skull. Telling herself to concentrate, she hesitantly returned to scoping the land. Her heart lurched from relief when she spotted 3 people, sparring she assumed, 27 meters, north of where she was. Her relief vanished when she realized she couldn’t leave the unconscious Kiba to get them and that they were probably to far away to hear her screams. She started trembling with frustration, while Kiba gave another painful moan. She went over to him,gently   pressing the back of her hand to his perspiring forehead to wipe away the sweat. She felt pressure behind her eyes as tears tried to escape. She let loose a shrill, shaky scream for help. “H-Help!” she screamed again. She laid her head on Kiba’s chest, his shirt soaking up her tears, her hands digging into the dirt from frustration.

Hinata stayed like that for along time, her throat throbbing and burning as she continuously screamed for help. She finally raised her head when she thought she heard trees rustling up ahead. She turned toward the sound, her Byakugan activated, relaxing when she saw the figures of the 3 she’d seen earlier. They finally came into view, causing her to tense up when she recognized TenTen, Lee, & Neji. How am I going to explainTHIS?! “See Neji, I told you I heard the cry of a damsel in distress,” Lee cried triumphantly as the 3 landed on the forest floor a few feet away from her. “Hinata-sama,” Neji called as he shoved Lee in the forehead, causing him to fall back. He cocked an eyebrow as his gaze traveled from Hinata’s red, tear - streaked face, to Kiba’s face, now twisted in pain, and back again. “What happened?” “Is he okay,” Tenten asked as she leaned over the out - cold boy. “U - uh..” she began. “His must accidentally have gotten hurt while they were training,” Lee suggested as he looked around, observing the training field. Hinata sent out a silent thanks to Lee. “Y-yeah. I need to t-take him to the hospital, b-but I can’t c-carry him on my o-own,” she explained, not giving them the chance to ask what she did to put him in this state. Neji still stared at her, his eyebrow raised higher, as if he wasn’t convinced.

Gulping down the lump in her throat, she turned to Kiba, gasping when she saw Lee and Tenten pulling him, his body swaying right and left in their tug-a-war. ”Let go, Lee! We shouldn’t move him till we know what’s wrong!” Tenten growled, yanking Kiba’s arm. “Let go so I can take him to a hospital! We need to get him to a hospital as soon as possible!” Lee insisted, yanking the arm in his hands back. “Let him go, both of you!” Neji barked. The quarreling teens instantly released their victim’s limp arms, more from surprise than obedience. “Now move out of the way” the young Hyuuga ordered, stepping closer to Kiba, his Byakugan examining him. He was silent as his piercing gaze traveled over Kiba’s slumped body. His brows furrowed when he got to the boys head. What the hell...  He kneeled, leaning over him, his hand outstretched. The middle and index finger of his outstretched hand glowed with chakra. Hinata held her breath as her cousin moved his fingers across the boy’s forehead, back and forth, always keeping his fingers a centimeter away. Kiba’s face twisted in agony and he screamed. Neji seemed not to have noticed, continuing to moving his fingers across his forehead. His pale hands stopped over the swollen chakra point Hinata had hit. He pressed his fingers on the point, Kiba stopping his cries of pain, and stood, turning to face the 3 observers. “I relived the pressure on his skull, stopped the flow of chakra to the point, released the trapped chakra, and started it again, to its normal flow.” He explained, his emotionless eyes never leaving Hinata’s relieved face.

Hinata almost collapsed from relief, but ran to Kiba’s side, examining his forehead with her Byakugan. She was amazed Neji was able to do all that in less than 2 minutes. “Now can we take him to a hospital?” Lee asked, earning a squished foot from Teten.
©2007-2009 ~Apsol
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Author's Comments

This is a continuation of my first deviation. In this chapter you’ll see what happened to Kiba, and I bring in Team Gia (Tenten, Lee, & Neji) Hope you like it, and remember, I need comments.

Oh, just in case you don’t know (though you probably do), I don’t own Hinata, Kiba, Lee, Tenten, or Neji.

Ch.1[link]
Ch.3 ~coming soon (hopefully ^^;)

Oh, there's an edited version of this chapter at fanfiction.net [link]

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:iconshinobutterfly:
HAHAHA!! poor Kiba. Oh and u know that u put the bottom halve of ur story in italics right?

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I did?! Crap! (i was sorta disracted with school & all >_<;) Is there any way for me to revise it, or is it stuck like that?

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...In my solitude, I asked to know the highest truth, and what i was told was to thy own self be true...
:iconshinobutterfly:
no i don't think so but don't wrry about it

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Out of mind, be back in five minutes.
:icongenn-chan:
Nice work. I really like it, it seems alot like the show.

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Sakura-Narutos always doing selfish things he would get in trouble for if he had parents.
Sasuke-Thats solitude.
Sakura-Huh?
Sasuke-You're parents getting mad at you cant even compare.
Sakura-Whats wrong?
Sasuke-YOU'RE ANNOYING.

I dislike Sakura.
:iconapsol:
Ok, thanks (i need to check my work more than i normally do)

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...In my solitude, I asked to know the highest truth, and what i was told was to thy own self be true...
:iconapsol:
Thanks ;>

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...In my solitude, I asked to know the highest truth, and what i was told was to thy own self be true...
:iconshinobutterfly:
meh don't wrry about it

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Out of mind, be back in five minutes.
:iconabelin-chan:
thank god his ok:) I would hadd cryed if he died...

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Why do everyone want to shine? I want to glow.
:iconapsol:
Yeah, Would've been really bad, had he died. Hinata would have had alot of explainig to do.

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...In my solitude, I asked to know the highest truth. What i was told was, ' To thy own self be true '...

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